Question: Would it read better if "JIB! That's it!" were in panel 6 instead of 7? Just an idea. It might be too big a hassle. Still a funny comic the way it is.
Tad. -- Yeah, that's how the first script read, but I decided that I wanted the reader to believe that the issue with Sierra's jumpsuit was settled as the reader moved into the third row. I also like the ridiculousness of a huge, crammed word balloon, even at the expense of good storytelling.
Cool comic! I like it.
ReplyDeleteQuestion: Would it read better if "JIB! That's it!" were in panel 6 instead of 7? Just an idea. It might be too big a hassle. Still a funny comic the way it is.
i dont get it...
ReplyDeleteare you implying women are sex objects?
AND are you implying thats how men view them?
AND thats how comics/sci-fi/media-in-general treat them?
...science fiction, INDEED!
Tad. -- Yeah, that's how the first script read, but I decided that I wanted the reader to believe that the issue with Sierra's jumpsuit was settled as the reader moved into the third row. I also like the ridiculousness of a huge, crammed word balloon, even at the expense of good storytelling.
ReplyDeleteAh, deliberate decision, then. Okie doke.
ReplyDeleteI like Sierra's weird scoliosis body in the first panel.
ReplyDeleteFunny stuff, Cannon!
You would!
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