Question: Would it read better if "JIB! That's it!" were in panel 6 instead of 7? Just an idea. It might be too big a hassle. Still a funny comic the way it is.
Tad. -- Yeah, that's how the first script read, but I decided that I wanted the reader to believe that the issue with Sierra's jumpsuit was settled as the reader moved into the third row. I also like the ridiculousness of a huge, crammed word balloon, even at the expense of good storytelling.
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Cool comic! I like it.
Question: Would it read better if "JIB! That's it!" were in panel 6 instead of 7? Just an idea. It might be too big a hassle. Still a funny comic the way it is.
i dont get it...
are you implying women are sex objects?
AND are you implying thats how men view them?
AND thats how comics/sci-fi/media-in-general treat them?
...science fiction, INDEED!
Tad. -- Yeah, that's how the first script read, but I decided that I wanted the reader to believe that the issue with Sierra's jumpsuit was settled as the reader moved into the third row. I also like the ridiculousness of a huge, crammed word balloon, even at the expense of good storytelling.
Ah, deliberate decision, then. Okie doke.
I like Sierra's weird scoliosis body in the first panel.
Funny stuff, Cannon!
You would!
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